Thursday, 23 August 2007

How to Write a Story With Thrilling Characters

David Mamet is often mentioned when learning how to write a story. In the afterward to his screenplay The Spanish Prisoner, Mamet said he’d wanted to create a ‘thriller lite’, placing it in the tradition of such thrillers as Hitchcock’s North-by-Northwest.


He was a bit vague about the details but right away I knew exactly what he meant. It’s obvious when you think about it, but it takes a genius like Mamet to point out just how obvious it is.

(For those of you from outside the U.S, ‘thriller lite’ is supposed to be a comic variation on the beer ‘Miller Lite’. It’s good to know even the best writers aren’t above the occasional pun.)

This particular thriller tradition has spanned decades and has a very specific set of recurring characters whose natural interaction with the hero sees them ideally suited to making the twists and turns of a thriller tick over like clockwork. When done well, hit movies and bestselling books follow.

The nature of the thriller genre means that some characters, or types of characters, are naturally suited to appearing in thrillers. Again and again the same similar characteristics pop up in succesful thriller after succesful thriller. They're not there because it's the rules, they're there because they're logical fits. You don't have to be a slave to any of the comments here when you decide to write a story, but you do need to accept that each represents how things are usually done.

Let’s look at a few classics of the genre. They provide a wonderful insight into the kind of supporting characters that a thriller might need.


Charade / N by NW / The Spanish Prisoner/ The Game

The hero - usually the protagonist, and not necessarily heroic in the traditional sense. The hero will be forced into a murky world by the villain and must draw deep to find the resouces to escape.

A friend – Sylvie/ mother / Lang/ Ilsa (lifelong servant) & Liz (ex-wife). The friend solves nothing, in fact they can easily get in the way. They do, however, provide emotional and practical support where they can. It may cost them and, in turn, our hero.

A (potential) lover (we hope they’ll live happily ever after with our hero, or at least be shagging by the end of the story). Like the hero, we want to trust them. Never who they seem to be, they are always someone new in the hero’s life) – ‘Peter’/ Eve / Susan/ Christine

A constant enemy (to get things moving) – 3 men at the husband’s funeral/ Vandamme/ Bosses/ CRS

An authority on what’s going on (seems to have potential to help) – Bartholomew/ Professor / Del / Conrad (brother)

The friend, the potential lover, the constant enemy, the authority: along with the hero, that gives you a cast of five. Everyone else is just a plot device.

Nothing is written in stone. The plot can go anywhere. At first glance, Charade and The Game couldn’t be more different, apart from their themes of deception and fortune. Look beneath the surface, and we see the same basic characters interact in incredibly similar ways.

There is a good reason for these repeating character types, and that reason is the thriller hero. These characters are well suited to creating dramatic situations that will test and reveal the thriller heroes' character. The lover who is not who they seem to be is the classic example of this. How the hero deals with the discovery that the object of his affections could be the cause of his pain is a great test of character.

More advice on how to write a story can be found here.

-Benet Simon & Mike Mindel


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How to Write a Story That Contains Suspense

When you write a story with suspense you need:

  1. A question
  2. Anticipation
  3. Different (and opposed) outcomes available

Suspense requires an outcome or outcomes split by morality and probability – it seems more likely that whatever is bad will happen. The more likely it is that the bad outcome is going to take place, the greater the level of suspense.



A countdown of any kind (eg: spaceship set on course for a sun or a time bomb) works this way: there’s less time to come up with a solution, the likelihood of a bad outcome is increasing and so the level of suspense is building.

Always remember that suspense is in the anticipation, not the result. The classic example from Hitchcock is the bomb under the table.




It makes the conversation between two men sitting at the table full of suspense. The bomb doesn’t need to ever go off, it’s the threat that makes the suspense.

The Bomb Theory is what made Hitchcock 'The Master of Suspense'. He lets the audience know everything up front but doesn't tell his characters anything. They blunder into the trap and the emotion of suspense is created.



Don't confuse suspense with surprise. If the bomb under the tables goes off and we weren't expecting it, then that's surprise. But if we know its under the table and we've no idea when it will go off, then that that is suspense.

If you want to know how to write a story with a suspense-filled atmosphere, I suggest that anything with a relentless edge is good. Ticking, dripping, footsteps – all such things can be used to imply some kind of impending doom.

More advice on how to write a story can be found here.

- Benet Simon & Mike Mindel

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